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  1. Survivors tales, chapter 6.

    Vincent, "Vinny", Vencelli.

    *tape begins

    Yeah, I seen it...

    Nobody knew what was goin' on, big flyin' saucers were appearin'
    all over the place, these wierd lookin' dudes, the "Ripee", or somethin',
    started appearin' and burnin' people up with ray guns and people were
    tryin' to figure out what to do, you know, screamin' and runnin' around
    and stuff...

    Just like a movie, you know ?

    Then I sees him..

    All red white and blue, and badass and stuff...

    He flys by so fast all I see is a red blur from his flappin' cape
    an I'm cheerin' and stuff, "Go man, you the one bro, WOO HOO !!!".

    He flew around under the flyin' saucer for a few seconds and then
    lands on the top of the Paragon Productions building.

    You know, that medium sized white job over there...

    I worked there as a janitor once, 'bout five or six years ago...

    Anyways, he's standin' there lookin' up, so I look up at the bigassed
    saucer too, you know ?

    I musta been starin' at that thing for half a minute, you know ?

    Then I look back down at him and three other cape types are standing
    there with him, lookin' kinda like somethin' ain't right between them
    like they are arguin' or somethin,' you know ?

    All of a sudden, like thunder, I hear "ENOUGH" in big red white and
    blue's voice.

    Damn, I mean they were six or seven blocks away, how could I hear
    that ?

    Dunno, bro, but I heard it and that's all I know.

    Anyways, big boy points, I take a fast look and see some smoke
    comin' up between the buildings, look back and the other dudes are
    splittin' off to where he was pointin'.

    Then it went down, the big man kinda bends his knees and there was
    this little flash of light that like ran around his body, you know ?

    He shoots straight up into the air toward the bottom of the big saucer
    with his mitts out in front of him, lookin' like a missile, you know, and I'm
    wonderin' what the hell he's gonna do ?

    Then *BOOM* he slammed right into the bottom of the flyin' saucer,
    and made a hole clean through it !!!

    Then *BOOM* he came back down through the other side of the thing
    makin' another hole.

    The flyin' saucer started warblin' around, smoke and fire came out of
    the holes, and then *KABOOM* somethin' blew up and the damn thing
    broke up into three, or maybe five, big pieces and a whole bunch of little
    pieces and all that crap started fallin' !!

    The big man grabbed one of the big pieces and then *WOOSH* he
    threw it over the buildings !!

    I was like, damn, wow, you know, but he wasn't fast enough to get the
    other pieces.

    The whole mess hit the ground and the buildings, him, the flyin' saucer
    stuff, everything !

    He tried, but he couldn't do it.

    I don't think nobody could be that fast, not even him, you know ?

    Musta killed a bunch of people.

    I don't know, you know, but I seen those fires and them buildings was
    all mashed flat and stuff underneath them big chunks of the flyin' saucer.

    But it don't matter none to me, hell, who knows what woulda happened
    if big red white and blue hadn't a busted up that thing.

    We might be talkin' "Ripee" now, or maybe everybody would just be
    dead.

    I ain't sayin' nuthin, I'm just sayin', you know ?

    *end tape
  2. Survivors tales, chapter 15.


    It's done, Lectra says that without a cooling system the engines will
    overload and explode in less than five minutes.

    Hope this mother is over the water when it blows.

    And as for done, so are we.

    The door to the engine room is blocked by two or three dozen wedgeheads
    I have bouncing in my ice patches, but the patches are fading fast.

    No way off the ship and Statesman isn't going to be here to save our butts
    this time...

    I grit my teeth as the rage inspiration hits me and start a suicide run toward
    the trapped mass of Rikti at the door when Blinker shouts, "Ice, I think I can
    pull us to the hospital teleport transponder in Steel".

    Skidding to a stop, I look back at her just as a pair of Chief soldiers wriggle
    through the ice, duck behind some metal crates, and bring their rifles up
    to fire.

    Multicolored streams of energy lace the air from both sides of the battle as
    more Rikti make their way into the room through the rapidly fading ice
    patches.

    "Do it !!!", I yell as, what looks like, fifteen energy beams converge on
    Fireball, vaporizing the majority of his body, killing him instantly and
    mortally wounding Lectra behind him.

    Lectra screams as her left arm ceases to exist and several of her internal
    organs are damaged beyond repair by the searing beams.

    She crumples to the floor and I hear another of my friends scream.

    I didn't have time to look and see who it was, Blinker needed a brief
    moment to tag our atomic structures for teleport and I was trying to
    give it to her by hammering the doorway to keep the Rikti from getting
    further into the room.

    Tomino shoves me aside and rushes the door to try and hold them,
    but even his nearly invulnerable giant body won't take the repeated
    energy blasts for long.

    His endurance drops to zero just as a Chief Soldier draws one of those
    damned energy blades they carry.

    It slices deeply into him, his body twists toward me, I see blood gush
    from the rip in his suit.

    He grabs the Rikti and with a howl of rage he snaps it's neck like a twig
    flinging the corpse aside as more of them dogpile onto him, slashing and
    blasting, trying to bring down his mountain-like figure.

    His fury is titanic, through the haze of blood and pain he swings his
    massive fists and everytime they connect a Rikti dies.

    He knows he has only moments of life left but every one of the moments
    left to The Tremendous Tomino will count toward his friend's chances of
    escape.

    His life ends with the slash of another Rikti blade that severs his spinal
    cord, his huge body crushing and pinning an armored lieutenant and a
    conscript as he falls.

    Rikti corpses, and parts thereof, are scattered liberally near the door but
    there seems no end, they just keep coming.

    I unload a freezing rain on the group nearest me trying to break them up
    when everything in my vision seems to go into slow motion.

    Out of the corner of my eye I see Lectra, rapidly approaching death,
    struggling to stand up.

    She leans her tortured body against the ship's bulkhead, reaches to her
    belt and pulls out every inspiration she has.

    Raising her remaining arm up, she crushes the slightly glowing colored
    capsules in her hand.

    Her body and face stiffen and she's immediately surrounded by a bright red
    and yellow glow from the nanotech energy fields the damage and accuracy
    inspirations produce as they course through her ruined body.

    I don't see the green glow of any healing nanites.

    Paying no attention to the energy blasts that are splashing off the bulkheads
    nearby, her face relaxes from the massive rage influx and coalesces into a
    grimace of pure, unshakable, determination.

    Clenching her fingers into a fist, she points at the group of Rikti that are
    massed near the door.

    She was drawing every erg of energy she had into one last shot, and even
    though my mind was screaming "DO SOMETHING" I can only watch the
    tableau as it unfolds in slow motion.

    Blood trickles from the corner of her mouth as she unleashes the most
    frighteningly beautiful electrical display I have ever seen.

    Like a living Tesla coil, electrical arcs coruscate outward from her body
    followed by a massive bolt of lightning-like electrical energy from her fist
    that instantly kills the twenty, or more, Rikti conscripts that had pushed into
    the room.

    As she once again crumples to the floor, I look into her lifeless eyes and
    I know I'll never hear Lectra's jokes or laughter again.

    Even such a titanic blast isn't enough though, a half dozen armored
    lieutenants and a Chief soldier are still in action, firing as fast as their
    weapons will allow.

    I can hear the pounding of the Rikti feet on the metal deck plates as more
    of them run toward the room we're trapped in.

    The hypnotic instant of my friend's brave death is shattered as Blinker
    yells, "STAND STILL"

    I see the familiar glow of Blinker's teleportation field surround me, and
    in the next instant I hear her scream as an energy bolt tears through her
    chest.

    The normally instantaneous teleportation becomes a momentary blackness
    and I feel like every atom in my body is being compressed and burnt in a
    nuclear inferno.

    I convulse in agony as I materialize just outside the hull of the doomed Rikti
    saucer and instantly began to fall toward the ground four thousand feet
    below.

    Flailing dazedly as I fall, I notice is that the air is cold, freezing cold.

    How can that be ???

    Cold has never affected me.

    Gasping for breath in the onrushing wind I try to form an ice patch
    underneath me to create drag and at least slow my plummet.

    Nothing !

    Nothing is happening !!

    I panic, trying to generate any of my ice powers as I plunge toward the
    ground.

    Nothing.

    Wild panic, powers will not work, none.

    Nothing I can do.

    I can see the roofs of skyscrapers in Steel Canyon and they are coming
    at me way too fast.

    I close my eyes.

    __________________________________________________ ____________________________

    Pain.

    Try to scream, oh Lord, everything hurts so bad.

    My friends, I have to help them, where are they ??

    A voice yells, "Code blue, crash cart, NOW !" beeping sounds, something cold
    enters the vein in my right arm.

    Strange dreams, Rikti everywhere.

    Awareness and pain come again, and fade just as fast, time is a blur.

    I open my eyes, and this time I really do scream.

    And scream.

    And scream.

    __________________________________________________ ____________________________

    I lived.

    When Blinker died while trying to teleport us it caused me to somehow lose
    my mutant ice manipulation abilities.

    I guess that part of me just didn't teleport.

    With nothing to slow me down, I impacted a skylight on on one of the Crey
    super towers, went straight through it and hit the floor below at about 120mph.

    Doctors said I should have died, but something in my mutant constitution
    kept me living.

    Almost two years after the day I impacted Crey Super Tower #8 I left the hospital.

    My legs, well let's just say that the prosthetics let me get up and move around
    pretty good, the amount of metal holding the rest of my bones together plays
    hell with airport metal detectors and my left arm works a little bit more with each
    year that goes by.

    I'm not real big on mirrors these days.

    My physical therapist calls my recovery "remarkable".

    Me, I'm still deciding if survival was a blessing or a curse.

    __________________________________________________ __________________________


    I found out later that the saucer was blown to bits.

    Luckily, most of the biggest pieces of the ship fell into the harbor in
    Independance Port.

    As for the rest of that heroic team:

    Blinker teleported but she was probably dead before she exited the hull,
    her broken body was found on a Steel Canyon street.

    The others either died with Blinker or with the ship but no other bodies
    were found.

    I was told that hundreds of metas were gone, or wounded so badly that they
    would never put costumes on again, and that the Omega team paid the big
    price but somehow sealed the Rikti portal from the other side.

    No chance to go to the funerals, I was busy just trying to stay alive.

    __________________________________________________ ____________________________


    One good laugh came out of all of it though:

    Crey Industries sent me a statement of damages for the building my body hit.

    Of course it was only a formal document for their tax purposes, not an attempt
    to collect.

    I guess the Countess wanted me to know how much I cost her.

    I doubt she knows, or cares, what that day cost me.

    __________________________________________________ ____________________________


    After several months going stir crazy I took a job with Freedom Corps.

    The once mighty hero now helps young metas learn how to use training
    enhancements.

    Am I bitter ?

    I don't know.

    I have to admit that I look at those kids with envy, remembering what it used to
    be like out there fighting the good fight everyday.

    Sometimes I go home at night and I make the mistake of looking at the photos
    of my friends.

    Those nights are so damn long.

    __________________________________________________ ________________________
  3. [ QUOTE ]
    Croatoa. ItÂ’s a name that conjures up images both mysterious and fantastical. In Issue 5, be prepared to enter a new enchanted realm of supernatural danger, where myth becomes reality and ancient legends walk the earth. Croatoa is a place steeped in old magic, ruled and contested by witches, Red Caps, Fir Bolgs and the Tuatha de Dannan.

    [/ QUOTE ]


    Paragon city does not need more Magic, the addition of Gnomes
    or another boring (and mucho drab) villain group (Cabal).

    Pumpkin heads are cool for halloween week but they are
    churlish and nonsensical for a persistent zone.

    After giving it a short run through on test, I give Croanerf a 2/10...


    Sidenote:

    Striga is top notch, the Sky Raider and Council bases (I still can't
    believe you took out the Fifth and replaced them with these
    council chumps) are really well done.