Captain_Alpha_EU

Wow, very impressive! I hope you're going to make a part 2! This is a very well structured story! Btw, now that ive read ur story can u read mine (Bloodshed at Bloody Bay) and tell me wat u think! Cheers. Once again, great story, i look forward to seeing part 2.

lol nice work m8, keep up the good work! lookin' forward 2 episode 9!

Part 2 is here!

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Hours had passed and the two renegade Longbow were lying on the cold prison cell floor, anxious to know what fate awaited them. Jones staggered to his feet, leaned against the wall and said,
"Argh, how the hell could we have hit our own unit's helicopter! Theres no escape from this one O'connor. I think this is it, they're gonna have us executed.
"Just shut up Jones! It was your freakin' idea you braindead twit!" Just as O'Connor walked over angrily to Jones, fists raised, a loud creak was heard. Miss Liberty and her Longbow Elites marched in, with distinct smirks present on all their faces. Miss Liberty stepped forward.
"Ok you two, you're coming with me." Miss Liberty placed the key in the cell door and ordered them to exit the cell. Jones and O'Connnor were handcuffed and lead to a small, dark room deep underground in the Freedom Base. The two prisoners were sat down and as soon as they did Miss Liberty walked around the table, paused and slammed her fist on the table.
"I hope you realise the seriousness of your crime, now you are going to pay deeply. Even if this means your life's end then so be it! Now as you are already aware your foolishness cost us one of our finest regiments and they are deep in the centre of this location. To extract the survivors, if any, from the crash site is suicide for my troops so thats why you two are going in! No excuses, no failure, no retreat. Understood?" The two of them shook their heads nervously, biting their lips.

It was now 1pm and Private Jones and Private O'Connor were escorted to the edge of hero controlled territory. Tension was mounting as they knew their chances of survival stood very grim. Miss Liberty took one last look at them, turned her back and walked away. A tall, Muscular Longbow Elite lead the two of them to a boat. It was a short journey to the border of No-Man's Land, and as soon as they had arrived the Longbow driver pushed them out of the boat and sped off. Jones looked at O'Connor and shouted,
"Great! Just Great! Now we're going to die a meaningless death! Oh well, might aswell do it with honour. Now Miss Liberty said that the crash site was roughly 600 yards inland, c'mon O'Connor!"
"Hey! Idiot! Miss Liberty did say where it was but she also said that this was suicide! And i don't want to die! I want to live damn it! I want to live!" Just before a brawl broke out between the two disgruntled privates laughter was heard from all around. Suddenly a sharp object flew straight at Jones' leg. He fell to the ground in pain and O'Connor drew his pistol and fired in all directions.
"Come out you B*******! Im not afraid!
"Heh..... Very Well". A huge, metallic figure backed up by several freakish looking minions armed with a vicious array of crude weaponry casually walked over to the stunned troops. The large leader of the freaks stepped forward.
"What's this then... trespassers in my town! Oh happy days! I'll show you how we celebrate the 4th of july hahahahahaha!" Jones cried out in agony, limped over to the freak leader and spat on him.
"Thats what i think of you, scum." The freak leader revealed large blades from his armour and stabbed Jones straight through the chest. O'Connor darted backwards, panicked and fled deeper into the ruined city. Immediately the minions chased O'Connor with a bloodthirsty look on their faces. Just as O'Connor was about to be cornered gunfire followed by a wailing warcry. The freak minions dropped to the ground like raindrops. The freak boss, who was now the prey, retreated into the abyss. O'Connor staggered back to his feet realising who it was who stood before him.
"Cortez....... no......... it can't be! But.. the crash!"
"Never mind about the crash private. I'm just glad you survived the crash. Funny though, i never saw you when the chopper went down. Well I'm glad that you join the few survivors of our Platoon." O'Connor, unsure of whether the Corporal was implying sarcasm or seriousness remained silent. It was then he realised what he had truly done. A majority of his fellow comrades, dead because of his recklessness. A long silence followed by O'Connor collapsing to the floor in tears. Cortez leant down to comfort O'Connor.
"Listen Private. Remember when i said i don't want to be here and you don't want to be here, well all i can say now to that is amen Private. Amen.
"No.... Colonel, you don't understand. The person who shot down the helicopter.. it was me!"
"Huh... no, no it can't be you. Y-You were on the helicopter..... right? Oh how could you! You're the biggest disgrace the Longbow has ever come across! Do you realise the grief you have caused us!" A loud yell was heard behind Cortez. A survivor screamed,
"O'Connor! You killed Jones! I know he wasn't the best of us but that was no excuse for ending his life!" O'Connor, stunned, crawled away from the very angry survivors but before he got too far Cortez stamped on his neck and uttered,
"No escape, no more sneaking off you are going to face the consequences for this one i assure you!" O'Connor, gasping for air stuttered,
"But....But i didn't kill Jones, the helicopter was an accident!". Cortez started to laugh and said sarcastically,
"Suuure, whatever you say.... traitor." An eerie silence covered the wasteland. O'Connor, as doomed as humanly possible was about to bring a new meaning to the term "bad luck".

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Ok thats part 2, now I'm gonna wait until a few of you reply with your thoughts and constructive criticism before i go ahead with part 3... I've deliberately left this one on a cliffhanger to keep you interested. Hope you've enjoyed the tale so far! Happy Reading!

Hey guys,

Ok my second attempt at this whole story writing thing, i was gonna do a second part to my previous sirens call story but i thought na so im gonna start a new 1.... enjoy!

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“No…. this ain’t right corporal! Why should we have to spend the 4th of July on patrol in Bloody Bay! I could be back at home with my family instead of stuck here chasing these wimps!
“One More word out of you Private and The only wimp that’s gonna be chased around here is you! Incase your mask is on too tight you may have noticed, yes it is the 4th of July and yes it is unfair that you and the rest of your hollow-headed platoon are on patrol today but you must get it into your skull that those Villains never take a god-damned holiday! To them the 4th of July is just another day of the year to try and bring us, the forces of good to our knees!” The private gave Corporal Cortez a glum stare, puffed and stood up straight and mumbled,
“Yes sir… Ready for duty… *sigh*”

Even though it was summertime you would never have noticed it here, this place certainly wasn’t Paragon. The air was thick with anguish and on both sides of this place appropriately named “Bloody Bay” Stood the fortresses of good and evil, Freedom base and the Arachnos base. And the 4th of July meant nothing to the forces of evil, independence does not register with Lord Recluse, only does he care for shrouding the free people of Paragon in an eternal darkness and forever encasing Justice in a vault of chaos. And Corporal Cortez and his 64th Longbow infantry rangers were about to be the ones standing between Recluse and his evil schemes.

“Ok Rangers gather up! Now I’m only going to say this once so listen well! I know you don’t want to be here, I don’t want to be here but its orders from the big guy that says more patrols and Task forces have to operate in this area 24/7! But I am glad that you are willing to do your duty to make sure that the air we breathe remains free, the ground we tread is enriched with justice and the lives we lead are honest and true! Now get going to landing pad C, I’ll see you there in a few minutes… now move out!!” Immediately the Platoon sped off, their minds filled with the knowledge their battle-hardened corporal had shared with them. Tagging along on the back line of the band of warriors was Private Jones and Private O’Connor, the “black sheep” of the 64th Rangers. The other troops saw those two as very different from the rest of the Platoon. They had no care for bringing any villains for justice or serving their faction with unshakable loyalty, they treaded the path of defiance and recklessness. They had visited the Military court over charges of disorderly behaviour towards other troops countless times and have been arrested for getting drunk and urinating on the Atlas statue many more times, but the way the war was heading even the biggest cases of grief involving Longbow wouldn’t be taken seriously. Because of the current state of warfare between the two sides tension was mounting, and the desperateness for soldiers showed. Jones and O’Connor were a good example of this.

“Psst…. Jones….. hey! You want to sneak out of this dumb patrol and celebrate the 4th of July in style!” O’Connor smirked at Jones.
“Ok sure why not… Why should we listen to Cortez when we can Celebrate the American tradition American style! Look what I got!” Jones rummaged through his duffle bag and yanked out several fireworks. The two of them crept silently away and hid behind a tank. The other members of the Platoon were still in a daze from Cortez’s little speech to notice the black sheep had gone.

“Wow, that was easy, that’s one thing Cortez is good for, his boring speeches putting the troops morale sky high and their perception down low! Ok now what should we do with these fireworks Jones? Fire em’ at a police drone?”
“Oh no I got a better idea… Hey O’Connor, you still know how to operate a tank from when you were in the U.S Marines?”
“Of Course…. Oh man I know where this is going! Miss Liberty’s going to have our heads shoved on a pike if we steal Longbow Property!”
“Oh ok chicken, I guess we’ll just catch up with the platoon and be vaporised by the Arachnos! Oh well there go the fireworks…” Jones walked over to the edge of the base and was just about to throw the fireworks in the sea when O’Connor grabbed his arm.
“Ok, fine. But you have to take the majority of the blame if we get caught. Just say to the judge you held me hostage!” Jones began to chuckle and pulled out a box of matches from his bag.
“Who said the tank was moving? Get inside and bring the primary weapon online, I’ll attach these lit fireworks to the tank shell!”
“Seriously Jones, you don’t know when to stop do you, all I wanted was to sneak off and laze about and now you want to fire lit fireworks out of a freakin’ tank! You’re nuts! But then again it would be cool to see it.” O’Connor climbed into the tank.
“Just our luck, it’s open!” He hopped inside and brought the weapons online. The tank made a mighty roar and Jones shouted,
“Yo! O’Connor! Fire the shell in 5 seconds! Jones lit the firework, threw it inside the weapon, leaped for cover behind a pile of sandbags and watched in anticipation.
“3….2……1……BANG!” The shell took off at alarming speeds towards the sky with the fireworks attached making a deafening screech. O’ Connor popped his head outside the tank and looked up at the sky in excitement. Suddenly the shell, along with the several fireworks exploded in a flurry of colours. However in the distance they saw an object falling towards the ground like a shot pigeon. Jones and O’Connor looked at each other in severe worry .
“Err Jones, WHAT THE F*** DID WE JUST HIT!” The two of them panicked and ran in separate directions, but within seconds they were cornered by dozens of Longbow. A woman approached them with her sword clenched firmly in her hand.
“You two, you are the most idiotic and reckless so called heroes I have ever come across! Do you even realise what that was you just shot down?” It was the helicopter you were supposed to be on! And it carried my dear friend Corporal Cortez and his brave platoon! And I assure you, if he is dead, you will not see the light of day again!” Miss Liberty looked at the longbow standing beside her and ordered,
“Take them to the cells and dispatch a search and rescue operation! We have a platoon down in enemy lines! All we can do now is pray that those brave men and women survived the crash, this is the last thing we needed today!”

To be continued……

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So thats it for now... my hand hurts from all that typing lol! I look forward to your feedback and part 2 should be underway next week!

ha u definately speak 4 all of us blasters ftw! we rule! (even if we r gonna die defiance makes sure we leave a trail of destruction behind us lol!

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yep we do die alot but who cares when we have mega dmg!

Hi guys,

Got nothing better 2 do 2day so I'm gonna have a crack at writing a story on here! No planning done jus all of the top of my head So have a good look and tell me what you think!

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The Battle for Siren’s Call

A Bleak sun rose on the battlegrounds of Siren’s Call. Commander Cortez of the longbow 12th company stood confidently at the heroes’ outpost smoking a cigar with a laid back smirk, certain that victory was in the hands of the Longbow. In the distance he saw someone running towards him at an alarming speed with the unmistakable look of fear in his eyes.
“Private! What the hell are you doing back here! Where is the rest of your task force! Jones took a deep breath and started shivering.
“Wherever I ran, all I could hear was gunfire, slaughter and the clanking of blades, I lost my cool in there Commander, I should have stood my ground but the Villains got the better of me….. I am a failure to you, the Longbow and the people of Paragon”. The young private fell to his knees in despair.
“Get up you fool! You think crying is going to bring back your comrades! For all we know they could still be holding out in there! I have faith in all my Soldiers… well nearly all of them” Commander Cortez looked down at Private Jones and gave him a disappointed look. He took several steps forward and unsheathed his katana.
“This day is not a defeat Private! Our iron will outmatches their lust for evil.” Private Jones staggered back to his feet having regained some of his morale from Cortez’s words of wisdom.
“Jones, now is a chance to redeem yourself, show me that you are not a coward!” Get back into the fray and find out what has happened to our task force!” You’ll be going with the reserve Force. Watch your back, the last thing I need today is more bad news… such as your failure!” Private Jones nodded and set off with the rest of the force. Just before they were about to set off Cortez tapped the Captain’s shoulder and angrily whispered,
“Make sure he doesn’t mess this mission up, if I don’t see a victorious band of heroes come back there will be hell to pay trust me!” The Force Captain took a sharp stare at Cortez’s eyes and set off.
Seconds seemed like hours to Jones as he nervously staggered through the sinister streets of Siren’s Call. Grasping his Assault Rifle tightly he could hear laughter in the distance. At first he just ignored it and muttered “Focus… Focus” But then a Longbow soldier yelled out “ARACHNOS INCOMING! IT’S AN AMBUSH! TAKE COVER!” Energy bolts flew downwards on the heroes and they immediately fired back in a flurry of panic.
“They’re on the rooftops! Grenadier! Hit em’ with all you got!” The Captain yelled.
“At once sir!” The Grenadier shouted. He raised his bulky grenade launcher at the rooftops and fired several volleys at the Arachnos. A wail of despair followed the volleys as the Arachnos soldiers fell like raindrops onto the city streets. Jones, not being the best soldier to retaliate to surprise skirmishes he lifted his rifle, closed his eyes and fired in all directions imaginable, at one stage he even fired at the floor! After the Captain ordered the Longbow to cease fire silence once again reigned. The Force Captain walked angrily over to Jones, pushed him and shouted,
“What the hell were you thinking Jones! Didn’t they ever tell you to shoot with your eyes open in training! The rest of the force started to snigger and Jones had an abrupt look of embarrassment on his face.
“I apologise sir, my nerves got the better of me” The Captain, looking slightly puzzled stepped back.
“Nerves! Nerves! These are Arachnos! They are scum who serve in a pathetic allegiance! If Nerves have any part to play in this battle they should be the ones with the Nerves getting the better of them.” The Captain turned around and started marching deeper into Siren’s Call.
“Onwards Longbow! We have a long way to go yet!”.

Right thats it.... I'm gonna wait n see if u guys think its any good and if you think there should be a part 2!

Great Story- I reckon u and sum other guys shud turn this in2 a movie Using CoH and CoV!

Keep up the good work gr8 stuff!

I like that idea of a community service chat channel... i actually did have 1 set up but my advertising failed so it had 2 b shut down but if enuf ppl want a channel dedicated 2 helpin out the new players then i'll gladly re-open the channel! Just send an email to captain alpha 01 if ur interested in bein an operator on the channel or jus wantin 2 join!

kk thnks 4 the tip! glad that u accepted the apology i didnt read the full story so i got the total wrong end of the stick! Still lets jus put this all behind us and jus have fun!

Absolutely Brilliant movies! It was inspiring stuff!
*Sigh* if only i had a gd enuf frame rate to make my own CoH-CoV movies lol

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and i want to be in anyway offensive to anyone so i'm sorry for that.

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(Don't) want to b offensive btw i'm a terrible typer

ok ok i guess i got off 2 a bit of a bad start but i jus wanna apologise 4 that last post. in No WAY did i mean to offend anyone and i want to be in anyway offensive to anyone so i'm sorry for that.

Hi Defiant Heroes,

Totally new to this forum so i thought i might aswell get stuck in and make my contribution! I wanted to do a little Analysis for the people of Defiant and the question is as follows,
"When you're tired of the constant lvl grinding and want to experience something else than fighting on CoH, what do you do? (For example meet new players and assist them in Atlas Park) Make your contributions i want to see what defiant people do when "they throw in the towel" for the day if you even do lol!

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Dude, the people on here will fry you with criticism if you dare post a story.. i *always* hesitate to even stuff myself because i KNOW it'll get fried.

watch how they'll burn this one.

[mutters] bunch of intimidating x$^£+**&!


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I agree.... it's a dying art.... i think there shud b more stories on this part of the forums no matter what they are. Makes a nice change and gives ppl something 2 tlk about. And this community will not "fry" you! This community is definately 1 of the best ive come along in ages of playin MMO's. I've recieved alot of help from 99% of my friends online and we are very supportive and kind to each other, and thats the way it shud b 2 cut out the negative attitude!(and btw troll's are very dumb so it dnt matter if theyre grammar dnt make sense lol ) I thought some phrases were very effective. Keep up the stories i wanna see sum more soon! Have fun!