Your Raven Strike is coming along great!!! And I love the lines on your Lightening Hawk, which is looking fabulous!! I am so looking forward to seeing the coloring!! 
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Looking great as usual 
very, very cool...
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Holy fabulous arts! With regard to your worry on the first piece, as a person uneducated in art, I would think that as long as the background is de-emphasized by the colors of the foreground it should turn out okay. I really really like both pieces!
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Let me know what ya think, as always good and bad criticism is always welcome
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On the first image I really like the wings they look almost like overlapping razorblades. The power fx swirling around the hand|
Originally Posted by Temperus_EU
Let me know what ya think, as always good and bad criticism is always welcome
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is a nice touch and is well drawn (it conveys electricity just by shape). The pose is fine and the anatomy is pretty accurate.
What I might suggest for con/crit would be
1: His right leg should be rotated a bit downward to hang a bit straighter... it's too bowed to be something
you could pull off without having something under your feet to push against.
2: The pinky needs to be shorter... it appears the same length as the ring finger.
3: The lightning seems to be arcing off the wings at random points, it should be coming off a point
like maybe the tip of the top row of "blades" (half way down the inner wings line)... also if the
energy is being struck/generated at the apex of both wings (hard to tell with pencils but it seems
to be coming from there) it should maybe travel down the inner edge which if the wings are metal
would be a cool lighting effect and could even be a secondary light source for the shading (the main
being the bolt coming off the hand).
4: the buildings, a few too many unless you want a crowded cityscape but if you do then they need
more variety... too cookie cutter. Some different shapes and or caps maybe even a lightning rod or two
on a tall tower nearby getting struck by lightning from the sky would make an interesting background touch?
Overall a very sharp looking piece, I'd like to see it when finished.
Amazing work!!
Very powerful feel to it!
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Keep Calm & Chive On!
Thanks all for taking the time to look and the kind words
Those are some great points CR and I really appreciate your input, the idea of using the wings as a lightning conduit is really cool and I'll definitely put that in!
Wish me luck
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Your welcome Temperus happy to help. You'll have to post up the finished piece when you get it done.|
Originally Posted by Temperus_EU
Thanks all for taking the time to look and the kind words
Those are some great points CR and I really appreciate your input, the idea of using the wings as a lightning conduit is really cool and I'll definitely put that in! Wish me luck |
Oh and good luck.
Let me know what ya think, as always good and bad criticism is always welcome
http://temperus.deviantart.com/art/L...ncil-135658206
http://Temperus.deviantart.com/art/R...nked-135657644