would be nice for some people to give me advice.. or what they thought of it... sorry bout double post btw
As a first attempt I think it's pretty good!
Only thing I'd suggest as a way of improving it, is make more of the "non standard" (ie non-3rd person behind) views; which I realise is quite difficult, but would make it look more like a movie, and less like "just" footage from a game. Angles like the one at the beginning looking up at him from the front - give a sense of impact imo.
I'll offer you the same advice that people have given me about my artistic attempts.. keep at it.. practise makes perfect 
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Thanks, i see what you mean on the not 3rd pereson, but its just so hard :P but i will give it a crack on my next one maybe make next one on hami raid... if it is ever gona happen :P
Yeah - other movies I've seen look very much like they're not using camera angles which are supplied in game. For example, a super speed character zipping past a fixed location. I would imagine this is done by using "first person" mode and filmed by another user? Maybe it's time to find some movie making chums heheh.
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very good m8 better than my first one so you will go far my son hehehe.
Very good m8, keep it up
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wow.. posotive... feedback... this cant be right!
Be kind :P it took me a while and i know its not as good as some others but i thought it was ok... well ok for my first :P enjoy
and btw, its very hard to see... so im gona try and get a download version which is alot easier to see :P
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7neMWaifJQY