The Soul Keeper WIP


Bill Z Bubba

 

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Here's a sneak peek at my next piece. It's still rough, and I still have a few ideas before putting in the final inks and colors. Someone suggested I put in a raven and moon. Also, I did this in a comic panel style and made room for word balloons, but still haven't decided if I was gonna place them or not, and I'm not quite happy with SK's pants and the flow of his trench. Tell me what you think, critiques, ideas, etc.

Oh yeah, this poster will be going over my bed when it's done.


 

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Dig it.


Be well, people of CoH.

 

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Work in progress. I post them to pick your brains before before the finished inks, when I'm apt to not make any more changes (because it becomes really hard to do so).

Critiques on a finished work, though highly appreciated, will not likely spur an artist to change a piece, it instead serves only to give the artist something to keep in mind for future works. So, it's usually good to try to get ideas as early in the work as possible.


 

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I think it looks pretty good. If you're really unhappy with the trenchcoat you can always have the tail going the same direction as the tie.


 

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Update

Fixed that leg and trench flow that bugged me, and cleaned up the image even more. Still missing that umph! I got a few ideas I will try out, and would like to hear some as well.

Oh if you forgot what the image looked like before... here ya go!


 

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Wow that looks Sweet as. nice work innovator.



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