Well that's better than I could do.
I don't know if it's just me, but he seems stout, I don't know why.
It's just my style I tend to draw guys diesel and women thick.
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I don't know if it's just me, but he seems stout, I don't know why.
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In general the stoutness illusion is formed from the torso having a longer-measured width (including armwidths) than height (from waist to shoulder). In this case, given the feature highlight of the massive biceps and upper arms, the width of the illusion is measured across the upper arms and sternum.
Toothpick-skinny legs could undermine that illusion, but in this case that's not a concern. However this tends to be a problem in getting Timm-style brutes looking right. (A Timm-style Bane can be quite tricky.)
In any case, this piece is looking great. I might humbly suggest there's room for some improvement on facial feature spacing. (Eyes in particular are usually not so crowded together.) Keep up the good work!
thanks I'll work on that.
Here is a picture I was working on yesterday. It took me about 40 minutes to finish working on and off.
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y5/...adowDragon.jpg