Please Critique

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Nymie, I've done as you've asked and looked at the picture with a critical eye. I believe that I have found something "off". This picture is reminiscient of the poster from the movie "Striptease", and I think it's a good concept. However, I think that you've made the girl's torso too long just so you could show her breasts. If she had a wider torso, in relation to the length of it, it would work. It just appears that she does not have enough mass to her to wrap around her leg to grab her other ankle, not without seriously hunching her body further and blocking her breasts.

Take a look at this picture from the movie and see my point, I hope. example

That's just my two cents, take it to heart or don't. But overall, this is a very nice piece. Keep up the good work.

Jim

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And WHY would you compare CoX art with something you saw on PPV?

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Because its an accurate pose comparison? <o.O> I mean it *is* just about the same pose; not identical; but very close - and given the lack of clothing in the pic, it keeps the attention focused on anatomical detail. Thus - it makes perfect sense ^^

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I always found comparing a real persons dimentions and size to something comic booky to be rather pointless. But that's just me.

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Plus she is all hunched over in that poster. I can bend you over if you like though.

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Umm, no that's ok. I like the pose you have better.

I want a rowr pic with a pose like that

I just meant it was similar enough to be useful <,< but I guess thats just me <'x'> I'll shuddup <'x'>

<- can't open yap without being a pain in the neck

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I just meant it was similar enough to be useful <,< but I guess thats just me <'x'> I'll shuddup <'x'>

<- can't open yap without being a pain in the neck

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Well what do you expect when you go around hitting people with a lightsaber all the time?

<. .> I thought they were into that kind of thing.

Err... >.>;;;