Bump comments are welcome guys and gals.
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It's a mid-summer day during recess and I was playing with my classmates, when I fell off the jungle gym.
I remember feeling no pain when I fell, But I do remember seeing a great figure standing before me saying "Get up! Get up!"
So I got up as he demanded. I asked "Who are you, sir?".
He replied "I am Jesus, young son."
"Am I dead?"
"No you're not dead, son. You got some work to do on Earth before you can come to the gates of Heaven".
Next I remember that the other mates and the teachers sobbing at me while I was coming to. But to their surprise I was not dead like they thought. I was standing up, looking around seeing the auras of my mates and the teachers, scratching my head.
I brushed off what just happened, even though I can still see the auras.
The next school day.......
I told my mum what happened but she said she heard from the teachers.
"I am ok though, Mum, except for a few things I been noticing since it happened."
"Like what son?"
"Well for instance, I can do this!" does a psonic attack on the coffee cup
"And this, Mum" Kills the family cat & uses the Howling Grasp
The cat begins to come back from the dead, As my mum is shaking and trembling of what she just saw.
She then exclaimed "You must never again use what you just showed me EVER again!"
Many years later.......
I never again used my powers until this one fateful day.
I saw the Skulls in the back yard of my house. I said "What are you doing here? Leave before I call the cops!"
Then I saw the body of the police man as he lay there lifeless. They started to rush me but I said "I wish I was able to slow them down!" and then a tar patch appeared.
They started to die really quickly, So I said "I wish I could play with their minds!"
When the psonic attack occured and wiped the rest of them out. So then I went over to the policeman's body and said "Howling Grasp!".
He then awoke from the dead. While he was coming back to life he thanked me, then got up and staggered away. From that day on I was transformed from a normal teen to a superhero named Captain Kappa.
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I hope you don't mind me doing a little bit of editing, but it might be a little easier to read in this format.
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It's a mid-summer day during recess and I was playing with my classmates, when I fell off the jungle gym.
I remember feeling no pain when I fell, But I do remember seeing a great figure standing before me saying "Get up! Get up!"
So I got up as he demanded. I asked "Who are you, sir?".
He replied "I am Jesus, young son."
"Am I dead?"
"No you're not dead, son. You got some work to do on Earth before you can come to the gates of Heaven".
Next I remember that the other mates and the teachers sobbing at me while I was coming to. But to their surprise I was not dead like they thought. I was standing up, looking around seeing the auras of my mates and the teachers, scratching my head.
I brushed off what just happened, even though I can still see the auras.
The next school day.......
I told my mum what happened but she said she heard from the teachers.
"I am ok though, Mum, except for a few things I been noticing since it happened."
"Like what son?"
"Well for instance, I can do this!" does a psonic attack on the coffee cup
"And this, Mum" Kills the family cat & uses the Howling Grasp
The cat begins to come back from the dead, As my mum is shaking and trembling of what she just saw.
She then exclaimed "You must never again use what you just showed me EVER again!"
Many years later.......
I never again used my powers until this one fateful day.
I saw the Skulls in the back yard of my house. I said "What are you doing here? Leave before I call the cops!"
Then I saw the body of the police man as he lay there lifeless. They started to rush me but I said "I wish I was able to slow them down!" and then a tar patch appeared.
They started to die really quickly, So I said "I wish I could play with their minds!"
When the psonic attack occured and wiped the rest of them out. So then I went over to the policeman's body and said "Howling Grasp!".
He then awoke from the dead. While he was coming back to life he thanked me, then got up and staggered away. From that day on I was transformed from a normal teen to a superhero named Captain Kappa.
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I hope you don't mind me doing a little bit of editing, but it might be a little easier to read in this format.
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No problem there will be mroe and i will re edit when i am not so tired. thanks again, Btw you never said if you liked it.
hate to be an [censored] but Bump.
a lil bumpity 
It's a mid summer day during recces, I was playing with my class mates, When I fell off the jungle gym, I remeber feeling no pain when I fell, But I do remeber seeing a great figure standing before me saying get up get up! So I got up as he demanded, I asked who are you sir? He replied I am Jesus young son. Am I dead? No your not dead son, You got some work to do on earth before you can come to the gates of "Heven", Next i remebering that the other mates and the teachers sobing at me while i was coming to. But to there Suprise I was not dead liek they thought, An I was standing up looking around seeing the aura's of my mates and the teachers, "scratching my head" i brushed of what just happened, Even though I can still see the aura's. The next school day I told my mum what happened but she said she heard from the teachers, I am ok though mum except for a few things i been noticing sense it happened, Like what son? Well for instence I can do this! "does a psonic attack on the coffee cup" and this mum "Kills the faimly cat & use's the howlling Grasp", The cat begins to come back from the dead, As my mum is shaking and trembling of what she just saw. "She then exclaimed you must never again use what you just showed me "EVER" again, Then many years later I never used my powers untill this one faithfull day I saw the skulls in the back yard of my house. I said what are you doing here leave before i call the cops, Then I saw the body of the police man as he lay there lifeless. They started to rush me but I said I wish I was able to slow them down and then a tar patch appeared, They started to die really quickly, So I said I wish I could play with their minds, When the psonic attack accurred wiped the rest of them out. So then i went over to the policeman's body and said Howling Grasp, He then awoke from the dead while he was coming back to life he then thanked me, got up and staggered away. From that day on I was transformed from a normal teen to a super hero named Captain Kappa.
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