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Quote:(with all those amazing, *really early* entries I just felt I needed every last second to get my entry anywhere near up to par!)Wow, I never would have thought everybody would get something in. Came right down to the wire!
Some great stuff this month. It's going to be very hard to pick who to vote for...
But I agree that we've got a bumper crop of great entries this month! I'm glad we'll have a 1st, 2nd, and 3rd vote to cast, there's so much to choose from! -
Quote:I don't mind it, I just didn't want you to get mod-smacked for it.You want to talk dramatic... about 4 minutes before 11:00 pm here I remembered you are in a different time zone and I had less than 4 minutes to get it posted rather than an hour and 4 minutes like I though I had. Chalk it up to my fever addled brain that I thought I had until mid-night my time.
That is why the first post was the full version... it was the fastest way I could get it up to beat the clock. I figured it would only exist that way for a minute or two until I could get it thumbnailed (I later changed it to just a link with no image visible after U-naughts post) but I'd rather that then get it up at 11:01 and miss the deadline by a minute.
Whew.
Man I hate being sick.
P.S. what is this stacking you speak of?
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Quote:It looks like Crescent has one on DA, and in the CityOfHeroes February folder - but has asked for someone to post it here and "can someone tell Wassy I got my entry in on time in the thread, I don't think she's read the note I sent her yet..."Alright, posting so I know that the deadline has come and gone.
Way to get in under the wire, U-Naught and CR! Unfortunately, I don't see an entry from Crestent, so he is out.
Because we have one entrant dropped due to lack of submission, we will not do another elimination via vote for February. I don't want to do multiple eliminations unless needed later in the year.
BUT, still to stave off the problem of having to "vote someone off the island", we WILL be voting in a 1, 2, 3 manner. All votes will have to include a 1st, 2nd, and 3rd choice or they won't count!
Stay tuned for the voting thread and new theme to go up this weekend. I'm going to bed!
At least, thats what it says under his DA entry. (ducking quickly!)
D'oh! I could've included the link to his: http://crestent.deviantart.com/art/F...n-Up-154754725 -
with only moments to spare - here's my entry!:
February's "Girls of the Zig" is Brutal Wendy
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Pong on the Lost's screen! but what are the hula hoops seemingly around the clockwork?
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Quote:Loomis books PDFs for FREE?!?! Thank you! (off to do some downloading!)Good news!
Andrew Loomis books are available for FREE in pdf format. For those unfamiliar with Loomis, these books are well-regarded in drawing circles as some of the best on the subject.
Specifically to IB, you'll want to grab the "Drawing the Head & Hands" and "Figure Drawing for All it's Worth". The others are worth downloading too though...and since they're free, why not?
And pay no mind to the date of publication - his drawing books are still very relevant today. -
Quote:I haven't turned one in for February, either - but its only Feb 2nd. (I'm trying to do better work than my Jan entry, seeing as everybody set the bar so freaking high already! so I'm using the time I haveMe, Lousy Day, battlewraith, frost, and Cristopher robin havent either IB. no need to sweat bullets until the deadline date.
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But its okay, cuz we've got until the 19th. I do hope I'll be done before then. but I'll take all the time I have if I'm going to have any hope of competing! -
Congratz out to Lousy_Day for top honors on great entry! and to Battlewraith (FrozenDeath), Frost, and JohnnyKat, too!
Heck, congratz to EVERYBODY! Inspiring work all round!
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The voting deadline looms! Hurry Up, folks! Let's get all those 11th-hour votes for my entry in there!
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Quote:I agree with what the others have said. Take this beginning that you've written, and ask yourself the questions suggested by the other posters above. Other questions will probably suggest themselves to you. (She's had the scroll since childhood, but where did she get it? Did someone give it to her? Does she even know where the scroll came from?)I recently started a sonic/energy blaster and I wrote up a Bio for her, I am looking for critiques and opinions on this new Bio.
A piece of parchment that Veritas had since she was a child held a scripture that needed translated. Veritas took it to the monistary of the prophets high in the mountains. This is what it reads.
"From the ashes will arise a pure and virtuous Angel wearing a crown of fire upon her head and carrying a bright white star in her hands. She will speak with the voice of thunder, and will be feared by both man and demon alike."
As Veritas heard these words she began to understand her destiny, she was this angel the prophets spoke about. Nervous of what they may do if they knew who she was, she quickly fled the monistary. For months she wondered, until she found herself in Paragon City. With so many other "gifted" beings here she decided to master her powers and reach full potential before returning to the prophets and announcing her true identity.
I hope to expand my writting style by recieving your advice.
Let your answers flesh-out the character, the setting, and the story. And its perfectly okay if the character, herself, doesn't know all details. But it'll probably be helpful if you, the writer, know them.
Even if your final version is something very brief (like the short bois in the character I.D. in game), having the more complete info available to you, as the writer, will be helpful.
Sometimes, it helps to write things out on separate pieces of paper and lay them out. Then you can look them over and physically rearrange them easily, in a rough fashion. But, if you're much more comfortable with a word processor, by all means use that!You're probably going to re-type and revise it a few times anyway.
And don't forget to have fun with it and enjoy it!
EDIT: D'oh! I'm a day late and a dollar short. Yes, EnnVee - it seems you've fleshed it out quite handily! One thing: "..fleeing the war the consumed Edinian.." should be: "..fleeing the war that consumed Edinian.." -
Quote:I think your link is broken. the three dots in the middle are not expanding to anything.
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in my researches on Pin-up art, I saw a couple of things referenced in different places as being main points of the style. Realizing that such things are always subjective (or is that objective?), and that I flat-out disagree with some of the definitions out there - here's a couple that I'm finding helpful:
- woman in a suggestive pose but acting nonchalant or doing something non-sexual, such as cooking or talking on the phone.
- Nostalgic style clothing such as from the 30's, 40's, or 50's, or sometimes uniforms (military or other) that have been stylized into shorts, or 1-piece swimsuits (especially very unrevealing ones) from the 1930s.
- Some pinup art is heavily related to the early drag racing and muscle car culture.
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Quote:that sounds like a good idea to me!I like this point system. I think we'll implement it for the February voting. Though I assume 1pt goes to their 3rd choice, heh.
Quote:I probably wasn't very clear, but its more like Romance with the option of doing Pin-Ups. I'd personally like to see more pin-ups, because I'm a lecher, but its more that we're doing super-hero Valentine's Day with the ability to be racy about it.
What I said about fantasy, fun, frivolity still applies. I don't want any Romeo & Juliet suicides or that sort of thing. Keep it light-hearted (pun intended, so eat it!!!).
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Okay, I offer one of my villains: Mr. Gnash from the Virtue server. He's a Mutation Stalker (Spines & Willpower).
Background: He is a mutant, the only child born to otherwise ordinary upper-middle class parents. He is horribly disfigured, but has an unusually hardy constitution.
In what seemed a nightmare, he manifested razor-sharp spines during his mother's first labor. Rushing to the front of the house, intending to drive to the hospital, his Mother screamed and collapsed to the floor. She convulsed wildly. His Father tried to help her. Neither survived.
Their housemaid managed to bundle the infant in heavy rags and fled out of pity, or fear of being somehow blamed, herself, for her employer's deaths, who can say?
She and the child sunk into the bowels of the city, hiding, scrabbling for food and shelter. Years passed, friendless. She taught him what she could. Together they learned to hide, to sneak, to be quiet and unseen, for any who saw the child reacted in great fear and horror. Many tried kill the ugly thing. All who tried, died. Only the housemaid remained.
One evening, he returned from foraging for food to find a motley mob attacking her. Kill her! they cried. She brought that horrible thing into our midst! Why would she bring such a thing here? they yelled. It will surely eat our children!
Your children?! he screamed. No, it is YOU I will eat! You! You stupid, frightened sheep! YOU!!! He lept into them, spines fully extended, bearing his teeth and howling. Only one managed to escape alive, but he did not go far. If you ever return, the boy yelled, I'll gnaw the flesh from your bones!
The boy then turned to the housemaid. She was badly beaten, barely alive. He withdrew his spines and cradled her in his arms, sobbing. This is my fault, he cried. They did this because of me! I curse the day you saved me! I curse the day I was ever born!
Her eyes looked at him with a fading warmth. You cannot, she breathed, cannot help your birth, my boy. You did not choose it. She winced in pain. Only do what you can, she breathed, with it.
Unknown to him, the lone survivor had found a sharp piece of metal and had slunk back to slay the monster. Die, you awful thing! the man stabbed at the boy. The boy screamed and instinctively extended his spines, spinning around to tear at his attacker. He flailed and flailed and flailed until he was spent.
When it was over, panting hard, he withdrew his spines again and returned to the housemaid. To his horror, he had impaled her during the attack. She had been near death after the mob's beating, but now there would be no saving her. He looked at her face, her eyes frozen open in surprise. The only person who had ever cared for him, and he had surely killed her.
The years that followed were difficult, filled with bitter loneliness, anger, fear, and hatred. Still, he persevered, he survived. He snuck aboard a freighter that took him from Paragon City to the Rogue Isles. He thought that maybe Arachnos' villainous hordes might accept him more readily than Paragon's bright citizenry had. He was only marginally correct in that. At least there, he could put put his skills to use. It wasn't a nice place. It wasn't pretty, but it would do.
For the most part, he expects the occasional clash with other villains and groups. Thats just part of the game. Lately, however, it seems as if Crey Industries is taking a special interest in him, and they aren't being at all polite about it. He has begun to investigate them, in turn. He is not happy with what he is finding out. The problem is, Crey is big, very big, and has its fingers in too many pockets. He has to admit he is going to need some help, and if the information he acquired from a Crey office is any indication, it just may come from a very unlikely source.
A discreet phone call to a number that was oh, so very difficult to obtain. Mr. Bayani? Please don't hang up. You don't know me, but I believe I have some information you might want. Information about a certain large corporation we all know and love, whose name begins with the letter 'C'. Information they would not like you to know. I think we should meet...
Now, I have another little script written, a sort of dialog of the meeting between Mr. Gnash and Bayani, explaining why exactly they'd both want to do this. and I tried to not over do it (Bayani's dialog is minimal) But I know and respect that you don't want anyone writing you into their stuff without your permission, so I'm not just posting it here. I can email it to you if you like - just as a here's why he'd do this. Just let me know.
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so, it looks like black & white is still okay? (which is fiiiine by me!! just want to clarify.)
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while I can see the possibility of distracting from the vote thread, I'm chomping at the bit to know what the next month's theme will be!
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this is a tough choice (in a very enjoyable sense) as they are all great entries, each bringing something unique to the theme! I'll say it again: Great Job everyone!
After a lot of thought, I'm casting my vote for Olympic thug skating By Battlewraith (FrozenDeath). Well rendered, captures Olympic theme well, captures COX theme well, shows humor yet also a deeper meaning, its th complete package. -
and I'll add yet another Happy Bday! wish, too. (two?)
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didn't Wassy say that today, the 23rd, was her birthday?
Happy Bday, Wassy! -
Great entries, Frost & Clutch!
humor abounds! -
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Now that my nap's out of the way, I've updated my deviantart page with the finished piece (at least, as finished as I want to call it. I could tweak it till Sunday and not be totally happy, butcha gotta stop sometime)
http://u-naught.deviantart.com/art/F...ntry-151216150
Looking at the submissions that have gone up in the interim, I am truly humbled! In a pleasant, good way, mind you.
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Mine's almost done, should only take a few more hours. I've posted it to my DeviantArt page, and will update that as soon as its complete (its been a loooong haul).
http://u-naught.deviantart.com/art/F...ntry-151216150