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Originally Posted by The_Candyman
I'd like some feedback on my first arc that has sat on the sidelines as each successive change to AE made it unplayable. I finally took the time to get it back up and would like thoughts on it.
Title: The Doctor's Medicine
by @Sammy Davis Jr Jr
Arc ID: 1668
Bodies have been disappearing from mortuaries without a trace. Your services
are needed to get to the bottom of this and find out who's taking these
bodies and what their plans are for them.
There is an EB and AV that can be scaled down depending on diff setting.
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Okay, the arc was fairly average to be honest.
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Descriptions: The descriptions for most of the custom critters weren't very descriptive. Carnies Crew for example, the had super powers (Force Field, Fire and Ice Blaster) but it wasn't explained how they got them.
The Reapers had no description just a nice little phrase (which was quite good). The others were fine.
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Placement: From what I deduced placement of things was set to random in parts, yes? Like the PPD Enforcer. It was in the back first then after an unfortunate dc it was in the middle. If the Enforcer is designed to help against the EB/AV have it closer (back room)
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really frustrated me was the third mission. I couldn't complete it. No matter what I did I could not take down the EB, even with the Enforcer and SoW. Even popped about five purples one attempt to have them run out leaving me defenseless by the time he was down to half hp. And yes, I am fully slotted so that isn't the problem. I would suggest toning him down a bit, unless the arc was designed as a team challenge. If it was you could have mentioned it on the thread.
-The plot of the arc was good though, nothing too complex but was easy to follow and pretty fun to play through. Reading the description I was expecting Vahz but got some nice custom mobs.
All I'll say is just edit the descriptions a bit and maybe tone down the ol' Doc.
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Okay, now my arc.
Name: The Fall of Rapture
Arc I.D: 289353
Faction: Heroic
Description: While walking through Portal Corp. you notice an unread message on one of the computers from a mysterious contact in an alternate dimension called Rapture.