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is there a particular format you prefer? i.e. word or wordperfect etc
i don't have either, and don't really have a good word processor program, well i had one, but it's lost

but i have story ideas for my character and once i finish would like some criticism/feedback

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Check out Open Office, works great for me since I send things off to people that prefer WP and Word (I have both, but find WP too outdated and Word too bloated). www.openoffice.org

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Ok, I read every page and don't recall seeing these, so:

- /candy : Kid/lady with baby stroller walks in, you steal the lollipop (big, swirly coloured one), take one lick, throw it on the ground, step on it. Laugh as the kid/lady with baby run away.

- /nono : Slowly raise finger, waggle it in a 'no no' motion, shake head once or twice in a 'no' (think T2)

- /breakyou : Point at the enemy, draw hands somewhat close together, snapping in half motion (possibly saying "I'mma break you in two!"

- /shh : index finger to lips, shhh

- /shh2 : index finger to lips, shhh, off hand doing a patting downwards motion as if to hush the enemy/crowd.

- /crushall : point with your index finger, sweeping motion in front of you, pull hand back towards chest and make a fist (crushing them)

- /voodooStates : pull out a voodoo sized doll of Statesman (or other heros, but c'mon, gotta go for the big guy). Poke a neede in it, bite it's head off, light doll on fire, etc.

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