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Yeah, Justice should be the Official Crazy/Inappropriate Server.

I think that all you would have to do to fix that hand is pull the pinky finger back and up as if the claw were grasping the wall above the rest of the hand, holding her up.

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Hmm. I'd prefer it if you didn't blow yourself in my thread, please...



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lol


I was not!!


I was blowing the smoke out of the way!

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Suuuuure you were.

LOL =^_^=

I have read many novels where the voice changes between chapters or even within chapters. A transition from a first person to an omniscient view isn't all that hard.

Just make sure you do not make the common rookie mistake and change voice within a paragraph. Persionally, I like a section break...like a double paragraph break in between. It also works best if you first sentence between switches makes it clear who the new voice is.

You might also use one of many different devices for your omniscient viewpoint...depending on your story. An "omniscient vewpoint doesn't have to be truely all knowing. Since this is a CoH story...the omniscient voice might be a future narator looking back on the story? Maybe a salty old detective? Or maybe it is a Crey supercomputer with microdrones collecting data on metahuman activities around the city. In any case, if you are going to be changing vewpoints...you might want to come up with a different flavor or speech patters for the different voices.

Those are just some suggestions. In any case, proofread your different voice sections seperately and then together with the whole narative.

Oh, and this is the section for posting questions like this. Just because most of what is posted is visual artwork doesn't mean that prose is any less appreciated or welcome.

What do you ride?

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And... It Is DONE!
link

I messed up a bit on ASSASSAIN, so dont scream and howl if it looks wrong, because I'm not an expert on blocky letters.

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Nice drawing there, MistahVorpal, keep drawing!

I love the color purple, but that text is hard to read. Also, I fixed your link text. If you quote my post you can see how it is done.

I agree Hex...Avatar of Thor is a very sexy picture. Makes you wish for a bit less smoke though, doesn't it.

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Hey Foo, I don't have any art to trade. Is there anything else you would consider?

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I'll accept creative endeavours, cookies or legal tender!

Or weird stuff. I totally accept weird stuff.

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Hmmm....

I think all the changes are for the better. The newspaper really looks much more like part of the image now. Does this mean there is another .5% you are planning on doing? Also, the version you uploaded this time is much smaller. Any chance for a larger one?

BTW *hugs* =^_^=

*dances around happily*

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One of our favorite girls in this forum asked me to take a poke at one of her characters. Juggertha did that and all he pulled back was a stub.

I however am smarter than the brute and decided to draw her instead.

I give you... Feral Kat

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I think it looks great Juggertha! Thank you very much for this great piece! I am not actually sure about the newspaper. It looks neat, and I like it, but I kinda agree with PMD. I don't know that it fits with the rest of the picture. Still thinking about it.

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Thors Assassin



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That is a lovely piece! WOW!

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Well if you add up all the avatars I've done since Febuary I believe Justice wins

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agreed!


You tell em Peaches!!!



*gropes Alty*

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Yay Alty! \o/

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Oh god what have I done??? I've started a war....


*scitters off*

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A war that Justice is going to win! =^_^=

Ahem, hello! Can you say TA FTW?

Static has a point...the number of links to a picture is probably directly related to the number of hits.

Have fun on your trip Sayterra. Where are you going?

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Too bad you're not on Justice...

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Justice is where all the real Art-freaks hang out.

=^_^=

Go play Juggertha! The art will be here when you get back.

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Well, I figure I'm far enough along to call for another update. Just a few more nights of work and it will be done And keep yer paints on there, Hems... it's almost your turn.

Either way, here's the progress so far...

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I love this piece.

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http://img56.imageshack.us/img56/891...pbystepwf0.jpg

Colors to come.

After two years of playing this game I think I finally found a hero I absolutly love.

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Very nice!

I bet you can't do Feral Kat that well.

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I hope it's to your liking, was just a wild hair to draw my friend's and my characters.

Large detail image: here

And their individual wallpapers:
Glacia
Fusiono



Enjoy
~Kash

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Those are really lovely!

*slips to the front of the line*

How do you feel about requests/commissions?

=^_^=

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either I can't locate information for commisioning... or your offer has past... (on the website)

I am interested in getting something commisioned... two character piece. Pose type thing, no need for a detailed background...

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Douglas Shuler Commish info page

That's 'cause you're so deviant!

<---I funny.