JHornet

Very nice flash back scene.

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However, the Hero opened up a portal and attempted to used a car to attack Lord Recluse. However, Lord Recluse easily slashed through the car and then held out his palm to fire a Dark Energy Blast, annihilating the gravity Hero.

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Should the red be Lord Ramapge? (unless I mistook something somewhere)

As always a very enjoyable read.

*thinks Daisy needs to drink less coffee, just a wee bit on the high strung side*

Looking forward to it, Unknown. It has become a daily ritual to come by and check for the next chapter.

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Well, I thought it was a good opening to a longer story...

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I agree, I look to read more of it should you continue the story.