Hericane

New York City

hmmm cute basic cartoon like style, cool adds for commissions there

good work man! I'm not too much a fan of COH machinima, doesn'y flow well as other machinima, but it looks like ya put in a lot of work into that. kudos!

Sucka!

That looks awesome, sweet pose, nice details on the robotic arm. Love the back story as well. Very cute how her real name is related to her superhero name.

sweet idea the emotional expressions and glowing runes look fantastic

cool idea, might be something worth trying. Although wasn't there some rumors or hints that went about that we'd see the focus return to the Reichman? I thought I remember reading something when Ouroboros went live and some devs mentioned it as future content with connection to the coming storm

that's so awesome of jarwa, that's a touching way to remember your friend. Kudos

both look slick. good work

very nice layouts, I like the fact that in the 2nd splash he did it in the style of a cover to the new JLA comic series

yup, found mine as well. cute little chibi group

I'm lovin this of the comic being just the artwork itself that's able to convey the story without any words. Reminds me of the Amazing Spider-Man issue where they did that. Not a single word word balloon, just that art.

For sure a different style, gotta keep an eye on that a bit

dang the detail and unique details in that is amazing, nifty little bits including the gun, and the way the arachnos banner is on the staff

None of my heroes golden/silver age based, but a few of them have a costume that could be considered close to those ages
Except for Dewgirl, these are linked from the respective characters on my Heri's Heroes page:

Hericane's Silver Age Look

Enacirreh's Penthouse Look

Lady Herricane's Civilian Look - Rocketeer inspired, follows Lady Hericane's, her twin, Civilian X-Men inspired look

Dewgirl - Baja Blast flavor related costume, Silver Age-ish seemed appropriate for some reason.

its a known bug... hard to fix as well since it's not reproducible, only seems to happen on CoT Oranbegan maps. It's basically one of the CoT portals that appear in the Oranbegan maps, either ones you use to travel through, or one that you have to destroy. I took a screenshot the first time I ever saw it happen:

http://www.mc.maricopa.edu/~byee/aer...rtalglitch.jpg

nice inks man, and welcome back to the forums

pretty slick artwork, different kinda pose there

sweet pose, incredible detail, gratz on such a great first comission too

same looks to be the start of a nice origin comic

this thread is epic win.... epic reply by alex... lmao

Cool deal, thanx for the responses gang, I designed it as 3 columns then one row to separate each section and give its own space. I might vary layouts depending on length of each section per each char but that's what layout made each sense, so the two column layout may come in handy sometime.

Wassy, ya say ya the more info a person can give you the more you like it. That's cool. If you haven't already, can you do me favor and go to my Heriverse and click on Heri's Heroes and then Hericane, and read that entire page for me and tell me what you think? Any other artist who takes commissions is welcome to do the same. Once you've gotten that, is the mini bio page that I've come up with in this thread, which is linked to Heri's info window on that page, a fairly accurate synopsis of what Heri says herself? Also from an artist's perspective, is her main page too much for someone to read to go through to find out what Heri is about? I already know one artist's opinion one this, and I think they're correct, but I wanna put this out there and see for sure. Note, these pages aren't going to change for commission reasons. I made the pages so each character expresses themselves in their own way. Which is one reason why it may not be informational, at least directly. Its there pages for them to let out their feelings opinions, whatever on what they've been through. It does give the read a sense of what they're about though. Just in a very non direct way, Hence the reason for the mini bio page.

Daemodand, see above heh. Each of my chars pages are a mix of screenshots and accompanying text. The above layout will link directly from the in game info that's on each character's page. It's supposed to just a wall of quick, quick short text to sum up the main page in case a person, mainly commissioned artists, to read in case they don't have time, or don't want to read the page.

whoa... those three are amazin.... Rox is perfect, Avo looks heroically strong in the battle scene, and Axe... freakin huge. very slick works.

Going off a good suggestion by LJ, I'm setting up a short/summary bio page for my chars on my Heriverse page, to link from the info window for each char and I've come up with the following so far (edit: making a few teaks based on suggestions so adding multiple layouts):

layout 1

layout 2

I've designed it for quick easy access to a short and concise guide for anyone who want to get a quick summary and don't want to find out the same info via reading what essentially each Heri reveals about themselves via their stories and stuff on their screen shots. I've intended it to be a mini handbook entry as well as an artist's reference, for those who don't want or don't have time to read the pages itself. There's no costume info in there I know, I'm placing that info on each of the various costume reference shot pages.

I think it should have all info needed, but I wanted to get other people's opinions. So, comments, suggestions, critiques, etc. welcome.

I have to tweak it a bit, for sure, I need to find out what name Portal Corp would use for our dimension, "this dimension" I know doesn't quite sound official lol.

edit: Thanks again for your suggestions, it's also sparking some other adds and lil bits I hadn't thought of.

*rimshot*

wow, that turned out nice from the t-pose to this, sweet pose and effects, I'm lovin these legos, Yer a magic man 8baller