Greymist

This is the preliminary sketch for the picture I am doing for the winners of the Timeforce event That was organised earlier this month by the Paragons of Justice and Justice radio. I had some trouble getting reference shots from them and am still guessing at their powersets so it may change. For example I have no clue who can fly or not so I may have it all wrong. Oh well C'est la vie!

Soo.... if you are a member of that team and see a glaring mistake please tell me

TimeForce WIP

Very Dynamic picture. You are getting to be the master of fight scenes.

As always: good job!

Nice start. I am looking foward to this picture.

But do I read correctly?? an OIL painting? That is going to be different! For you I mean. I am really looking to see you in another medium.

Pencils are done


The wolf is proving to be a challenge. I was able to find some wolf skull pictures as a reference that helped but I am cringing at the thought of the fur

Pencils

This is the concept I have for the picture I am working on for Mardun

MDvsGR

I will just repeat what I said in the in the thread of the WIP of the :

Wow!

Great work

Love the shadows and colors

Wow

Simply wow

this is full of melancholy. It feels like there is a great story behind it.

since you mention compensation I will suggest these 3 sites

MMOART
DOUGLAS SHULER
GUILDHELPER


All are very good !

Good picture of Jugg .


I like the facial and body expression

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Maybe I should get up to date with Lazzarus.He was born Larrenz Reed in the slums on Faultline. He later moved to Galaxy City and fell in love with a Kara Zang. They married live happily until their lives where shattered when Kara was killed on her way to work by a member of the Tsoo. Larrenz was furious and disgusted by the failed attempted of the paragon police department and the heroes to find his wife's killer. So he took matters in the is on he went undercover as a recuit for the Tsoo. After a few months he found her killer and attempted to avenge her death. He was not strong enough. A former Tsoo sorcerer named Xang saw the incident and took Larrenz corpse to his study. He used ashes for the tomb of Lazarus to resurrect him. The ordeal left Larrenz memory fagmented. Xang taught Larrenz the way of the Tsoo and help him take out the leader of the Tsoo. Larrenz was betrayed by Xang who only wanted control of the Tsoo not only that be it was him that order for the assassination of Kara. After being beating and left for dead Larrenz strenght returned. Not only that but his powers double. He realize the through death he gain strength. So he took to the street of paragon, since Larrenz Reed was officially dead he took on the name Lazzarus.So he fight the strongest of force and realizes that is not just his death that brings hime strength but also the death of those he slain with his blade. After years of dying and killing he was finally ready for his face of with Xang. He slice though the Tsoo warrior effortlessly and as he was about to reach Xang throne room a ghost his past appeared. "Kara, no it can't be!"

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Why hasn't anyone said anything about my story?



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Ok just to help you I reformatted you story with paragraphs and did slight changes to make it legible.

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Maybe I should get up to date with Lazzarus.

He was born Larrenz Reed in the slums on Faultline.

He later moved to Galaxy City and fell in love with a Kara Zang. They married and live happily until their lives where shattered when Kara was killed on her way to work, by a member of the Tsoo.

Larrenz was furious and disgusted by the failed attempts of the paragon police department and the heroes to find his wife's killer, so he took matters in his own hands and went undercover as a recuit for the Tsoo.

After a few months he found her killer and attempted to avenge her death. He was not strong enough. A former Tsoo sorcerer named Xang saw the incident and took Larrenz corpse to his study. He used ashes from the tomb of Lazarus to resurrect him. The ordeal left Larrenz memory fagmented. Xang taught Larrenz the way of the Tsoo and helped him take out the leader of the Tsoo.

Larrenz was betrayed by Xang who only wanted control of the Tsoo. Not only that, but it was him that had ordered the assassination of Kara. After being beating and left for dead, Larrenz strenght returned. Not only that but his powers double. He realized the through death he gains strength.

So he took to the street of paragon, and since Larrenz Reed was officially dead he took on the name Lazzarus. So he fought the strongest of force and realized that is not just his death that brings him strength but also the death of those he slays with his blade. After years of dying and killing he was finally ready for his face-off with Xang. He sliced though the Tsoo warrior effortlessly and as he was about to reach Xang throne room a ghost his past appeared. "Kara, no it can't be!"

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I don’t think I changed anything important but it should be easier to read.

As for comments on the story itself :It is a classic story of revenge.

I would have liked a bit more on his teen years. You mention that he was born in the slums of faultline: did he get involved with crime ? was he a gang member?

Kara is killed by the Tsoo: Was she involved with them? Or perhaps she was a prosecutor against them? Or Maybe Larrenz had no clue why?

All those are interesting questions that could be explored .

Hoping I am not too late

ok My take on it

panel 1

Caption: Meanwhile...
Ms L. Thought bubble : That's it come close.
Nadia: You're a pitiful excuse for a hero, Liberty.

Panel 2

Woosh (folowing fist)

Ms.L : Ah ha! missed! And now that I have you close....
Nadia thought bubble: Mistress you are asking a lot from me.

Panel 3

Ms L.: ...I am not letting you go.
Nadia thought bubble: Wait, little ant , when my mistress is ready...

Panel 4

Radio in Nadia's ear (electronic jaggy bubble): NOW NADIA!
Nadia: Now we finish this... Did you trully beleive you could hold me worm??

Depending on your choice ant and worm could be replaced by other insults more PG

Why did I miss this thread ?


This is great work Pep I am loooking foward to the finished product.

Well This is mine.

I hope Cuppa likes it

I call it packing day.

CuppaJo: Packing day

And the newspaper in the back is by WitchChild

Wow NPG !!

I had not seen your stuff before. That is great.

I am looking foward to see it colored

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Loving it....only thing I see that might (or might not) be wrong is her mask...?



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If you mean that she is missing it, it is behind her on top of the box. Weidly I could picture her packing in her costume but I could not imagine her doing it with her mask on. Kinda like undoing the tie. I know it does not really make sens but I rarely do.

Or did you mean you saw it but it is drawn wrong? If so could you expand so I can correct it?

updated on my version of cuppa

Here are the Pencils

Please comment I would like to correct any mistake befor it is too late but the clock is ticking (I hate deadlines)

Quote from her sig

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If you want to PM me, IM me instead RowrCoH on Yahoo/AIM. PM box full!

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Hope it helps

Here is what I am working on

Coffe break Note: this is just a rough. It will be redrawn

This is the concept: Cuppa takes a break from packing . In the back will be the front page of the paragon times annoucing her leaving. (Paragon time mock up used will be the one by WitchChild )

What do you think?

Once again Graver great work.

I loved your description of the challenge the boards gave you. Specialy the fact that you made it work for you instead of fighting it .. Very zen..

Soooooo When are you back to the inking moede Rowr?

You are good at it and I am sooo looking foward to see what you do with my pencils.

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Good thought, I didn't think about the way out of the hold.



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what is the power set of NN?

Just a sktech


doing a lot of faces right now ...because something is bothering me on most of them and I am trying to correct it. I need to be better at faces for the next 2 project I will do. They will be group shot and not everyone wears a scarf over there faces.

Practice... Practice ...Practice.

Thanks that is good advice . I will rework it as soon as I have time.

Unfortunatly the mirror might not be as useful as it could since I have a beard but Istill can use it to see expressions and will pay attention to those things when looking ay other poeples.

Thanks again

Very cool.

Makes me think of comic covers ..... You know when they had alternate covers so you would buy the same comic several times.

Great work