clean, precise... a little wordy sometimes
I liked the custom characters. the Test guys look so cute in their matching outfits!
good details. I missed a few, but I like that the npcs had bios.
the intro to the last mish felt rushed. there was a disaster, but Mynx sounded so casual. seemed a little forced
still, great job!
*edit- also, where were the allis in the last mish? I couldn't find them.