DerektheAwesome

Wow. That's really good. My only critique is (I had to stare at it for a while to find one ) is his metal arm thing. It looks a bit like the metal part is overlapping the chest, and it doesn't look like it's supposed to be. I would make it more apparent that the chest is in FRONT of the metal arm. It's really small, just like the line at the edge of his chest.




Sorry I couldn't think of a more productive critique...

Surprise!!

Yes, do you take requests? >.>
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You can do Zapros if you want.

I'll do him, but post in Derek's Sketch Thread so I remember.

Hey Graver, upload the one with the smeared watercolor!!

How come most of your friends are girls?








I mean, I'm not implying that I'M a girl or anything!!

No, critiques are good!!


So sorry about the shoulder pads and the white liney thingies.

Oh... Crap... I just noticed; I forgot the spiked shoulders... Sorry.

I know, that was a mistake, and I tried to fix it, but it's weird, I usually fill my flat colors in twice, so it takes out that white part... But when I filled it again it filled the whole drawing... O.o Sorry about those little parts.



Glad you like it though!

The stomach I think is a little bit too thin, so your mind doesn't think that's part of the body, because the see the rest of the body going around it, and it just doesn't seem like it's connected. Great start though, I'm sure Rowr will love it!

I'm always open for feedback and critiques, as many as possible... I'm trying to improve.

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Link! This is in compensation for my last TA being so terrible...




EDIT: Fixed the lighting a bit, check the link again...

Sure, I'll draw him, got any backstory on him, anything?

I was there when the two guys started fighting, they were acting like idiots... I got a screenshot, but for some reason it's not on my clipboard anymore...


But it was only two guys that could attack eachother... One was a corrupter, I think, and the other was a hero, not sure what he was... But then I left, and checked out Faultline.

It's Evanescence. (No, I didn't just look that up. )




Great movie, (Or rather a teaser FOR a movie ) I agree with squirrel on the critiques, I was going to say something about spelling and grammar as well... But just work on the little things, that's a great movie coming, and cool text affects with the shattering glass thing.

No problem. The poster will probably take more time, when someone asks me for a poster, does an art trade with me, or anything like that, it usually takes longer, and I put more work into it.. No, you people can't all jump in and yell "POSTER" now.




If you want another drawing though, you're not limited to just one.

Trenchcoats haven't been tested yet, on our side anyway, but you should be able to have one with robo arms. It's a "back" option, such as capes. Therefore you could have your exact same costume that you have now, except have a trenchcoat over it. And you can have the trenchcoat open. Not even sure if you can have it closed.

Nice, lol... That was funny. Do YOU like big butts?

I hope they come out with more costume pieces when they actually launch i8.







There's barely anything new, from what I've heard about test...

lol, "Squiddy Attack"?

I'm trying Gamestop today. If they don't have it, I'm going to somehow persuade my parents into taking me to random places 'til we find a preorder.

I'm preordering the Wii today, too!




Can't wait for Red Steel and Super Smash Bros. Brawl!!

No, not what I'm talking about, I can tell the thumb is there, but his thumb is facing toward whatever he's about to smash, which means he is probably going to break his thumbs. I would draw his thumbs facing inward, so the side of his fist is the smashing part. But that's realisticly, hehe.

Is the part of his hand farthest away from his thumb facing us, or is his thumb nearest to us? Sorry, I'm not making any sense, am I? >.<