Deebs

okay im betting threadlock come clock in time for the mods and for once the thread won't have my fingerprints on it
<mandark laugh> mwahahahaha mwah ha ha ha haha

by the way Rocket Boy , Kheprera I must extoll to you the virtues of Caramel kettle corn , if your gonna watch some back and fourth you must do so with style

<eats her kettle corn with her pinky out >

The moon police ?

I mean this in the most polite way but your not scoring any points by continuing with this discussion as it stands right now im doubting your gonna get too many bites from the various arty types . best to just let the thread die

read her DA journal and find the easy to follow instructions :P she has it on a different art site that hosts blue art

XD I genrally don't draw past a certain size as it then becomes more about the chestlets and less about the person im drawing .

chalk it up to scarf style that if I ever draw your character you'll end up with small to medium chestletts ....even the guys

wait until its done , if he shows it page by page he is locked in :P he may after completeing it decide to go back and tweak things :P

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someone delete this thread. too many people are misunderstanding my post.

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Simply drop a note to niv or Koj asking for the thread to be deleted or locked as your the OP , and as much as you want to reply to various comments Id strongly advise against it and just let this all pass over .

theres no way this thread will end well

boooo <takes her credit back >

well the actual character has white hair , the towel is definitely going bright , Subtle color on the tiles fading out to white is a cool idea .

Heres a link to aReference of Tanks 4D from game

yeah londer has a good eye for the details , I didn't notice it till he mentioned it then my eyes looked at it differently and I wondered why I missed it the first time

sorry sorry , i'll refrain from Oz prison shower references in the future

the feet are sorta a scarf thing they are unlikely to get much smaller but im always happy to discuss their positioning , i'll add toes in in the next update .

as it stands now i.ll be adjusting the foot a bit , giving her a bit more fuller wilder hair from the first go around and trying to recapture the sultry look on her face .

after that if you yahoos don't see anything major i'll likely ink her
and then debate coloring

are we sure they merged ? I think this is a pornographic representation of two trucks joined in premarital wankery .

Good Sir my virgin eyes are offended by yonder image of premarital truck wankery and I shall be reporting the mods on you post haste so that our puritanical like forums may remain smut free !

peddle your Automotive erotica somewhere else !!

good day sir !

...oh my look at the size of the gear shifter on that brute , my word !

? im missing something aren't I ?

<waves her hand safely from her comfort zone>

Well in the OP's defense it never hurts to ask Still most peoples portfolios are filled with things they are intrested in .

Its hard enough to get most of us to draw on demand even moreso if its not one of our pet projects , the only way to circumvent that would be to either pay someone or luck into someone that feels as strongly about your project as you do .

Most of us are fairly creative and like to let our imagination go wild when we work on things , which we can't really do with someone else is holding the reins .

I do wish you all the best with your comic though

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Sayterra explains it really really well

oh come on, I can't be responsiable for all the forum dust ups :P Someone else gets the dubious honor from time to time

I stayed out of this one

yep your totally right about the foot and leg ... I wonder why I draw lopsided like that ..I tend to do that alot with standing poses .

as for the soap id move it but then id have to bend over to pick it up and ive been told never to do that in a prison shower .

yeah definitely doing a work over on the face and hair tonight
thanks for the scribble overlay its greatly appreciated

noted , im going to do another pass on the hair and face tonight

and thanks

well the joy of rough pencils is its easy to change around

no need for thanks , honestly . I needed a bit of practice drawing someone other then DB .

I'll mess around with the hair a bit tomorrow but for now im all sleepy so im off to get a lil nip of something to drink then gonna
curl up into a angry artist ball and snooze a bit

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Seriously pushing it Scarf.

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put a censored bar over the pushing it area on the old version and the newer version its very very obvious hair is covering her in the best tradition of Lady Godiva

True to my word , updated version

thanks for the feedback folks .. i'll let it sit for a bit and see if anymore critiques arre forth coming but adapted a few of battle wraiths comments as well as a few received via notes

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Seriously pushing it Scarf.

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Seriously though, even with the incredibly good critique, I really like how your style is unique. There are some things about your art, ie larger head, that do not offend, imo. I kinda like it your way. Understanding anatomy is really important, but there's something to be said for choosing to draw the art the way you want to draw it.

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Oh I agree but im still have sooo much to learn/figure out that I really do look forward to getting redline feedback , part of my dislike of verbal / forum feedback is I often have a hard time picturing what others are describing whereas with the red line method its pretty straight forward .

and sometimes its really hard (for me ) not to get really styleized
so geting a bit of scribble feedback lets me pull back a lil bit but still be scarfy

ps

Thanks to anyone that takes the time to look and say hiyas , Double thanks to anyone that does a red line critique

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Seriously pushing it Scarf.

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I'll make the hair a bit more pronouced , im defintely not trying to skirt rules or make trouble .

If the updated version i'll post tonight isn't up to your standards i'll use the redirect or censored bar , honest injun

AHAHAHAHA if I did that I think id get a small vacation from the forums from niv and koj .

Also I think id likely give forumites ulcers if I started posting nude gift art of their characters

<blinks>
"Scarf thanks for the art ...sorta but why is my robot naked and anatomicly correct ? "

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I just saw it , left him a reply on DA but sooo wanted to reiterate how much the redline scribble overlays help me see things I wouldn't notice otherwise

Sorry sorry for not visiting your DA more often and totally forgetting to star that Graver comission you had done ((where DB made a cameo ))

Hopefully by making amends with cheesecake you will call off your legion of voodoo zombie chickens !!

Tanks 4 D Memories

As usual your welcome to Red line critique (or blue if you prefer ) I can't really understand written critiques So I usually have my eyes glaze over and alt tab to something intresting :P