Ashcraft
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Now that you mention it. I do think I'm running a...
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I'm Fine! Jeeze! Dang kids and their medical doohickeys. I can cross the street by myself. Don't need no little *grumble grumble grumble* -
Congratz, Zaphir!
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Family Amily
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*Cough cough*
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Looks cool. Good luck with your contest!
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I'll give it a shot.
"Emmanuel Knight spent his whole life combating the creatures of evil that threated his home, his family, and his kingdom. When his raiding party was rousted by an unlikely alliance of werewolves and vampires, Emmanuel soon found himself alone, bloodied and infected with the blood of those that he despised.
A man like Knight doesn't take such a thing without a fight, so when the moon rose and his transformation began he opposed it with every fiber of his being. The willpower of a man who slayed such creatures for a decade was put to the ultimate test.
What resulted in his internal struggle was that he became something not man, nor beast. Whether it was his will, or the strange mix of trans-formative toxins is unknown, but the result was that Knight was forever paused between the two extremes. He retained his intellect and honor, but his body was that of a monster.
He takes every measure he can to control the primal urges that attempt to coerce him to complete his transformation. He anoints his body with holy water, and ties chains of iron around his skin to control the blood that runs within his veins. Someday he hopes he will find a cure to his condition, to return to his former life. Until then, he will be the wandering hero, the one and only Fanged Knight. -
Thanks for the feedback! Making changes now! The arc was kinda rushed, so there are a lot of mistakes in it as you found. Eventually it will be up to par with my other arcs. ^^
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Quote:How did you know? :-OOriginally Posted by Amygdala
Fixed.
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No, I refuse to post a cupcake.
I will post this instead.
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Hippy Anniversary, guys!
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Wait wait wait...
Ok, you can stop waiting.
Now look at the first post.
Back to my post.
Look at Horus' avatar.
Back to me.
Now type your own post.
Does it look like my post?
No it doesn't.
Now go wish Horus a happy birthday so it CAN look like my post.
HBD, Horus. -
As always, good luck to all who entered!
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Thanks a lot for the subjective feedback. I'll definitely working on improving her conversations to convey her obsession ... and offer more insinuation of the player's resistance to the idea. ^^
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Woot! Thanks for the review, Bubba! A lot of stuff that can help me make it better. One thing I don't quite understand was this tweet:
Quote:I checked the popup on that mission and it says nothing of the sort. Was this text in another location maybe?It's the big WSDPR map, and popup says shield generators are on top of the building. Wonder if it really works that way. -
Submitted: The Sinister Song - #454892
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Quote:And everything in between.Originally Posted by prvtslacker
All to save the Ritki or Squirrels??
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It was me. I did it.
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Quote:The problem is that without the 'find the exit, it is possible to complete the mission without fighting the monster, which breaks a ton of continuity. Finding the exit doesn't cost as much storywise, as I have it in clues that you are trying to block the exits to keep him from escaping.Originally Posted by Ramification TM
Maybe I missed something on the mission door exit? All that happened when I finished was to find an exit. Was an ambush suppose to happen or something?
When you have a find the exit mission you know they aren't bad and how I've seen many people use them- An ambush happens so you have to find the exit to prevent the mission complete before the ambush. OR you go in and there aren't many spawns- get to the back- interact with an object then all the NPC's spawn.
Like I said maybe I missed something. To me it seemed like the only reason you had to find the exit was just for the sake of finding the exit.
Like I said, still working on it (when I have time) but for now that is the best fix I can find. -
Ahahahahahahaha *Gasp* hahaha
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Quote:Ok, late to the party! Has anyone posted this yet?Originally Posted by Demobot
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Your day better be happy, buster!
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Quote:Yes. Yes, they are.Originally Posted by prvtslacker
^^^^^ this and My talants are in other art forums.
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I have no musical talent... so I heartily applaud those of you who do! All I can do is edit stuff together to look pretty. >.>
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